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It could use some work on the moving holds.
a really good job but i think the extreme of each movement have a timing a little too even if you exaggerate some of them it would be more interesting i think
Wow the movement is splendid
it feels very pose-to-pose, and doesn't feel natural. Try to act out the scene yourself, and relax/just do what comes naturally. People don't really hit key poses or try to emphasize every phrase with a unique gesture!
Posing and timing are good.
Description: my first time in 11 Second Club
Experience: 2 years
Time taken: 4 days