Richard Adams:

The emotionalism in this one is really good. The movements themselves, not so much. The scenario you chose works really well.

Andrew:

Needs a lot of refinement, I hope you try next month's challenge as well!

Tom S:

The timing of the mouth to the words seems to synchronize only at the very end. One thing that may help is to do simple mouth shapes, just eyes, eyebrows, and mouth, on a separate layer to work out the timing and then use that as reference for the final drawing.