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happy birthday princess

by Dario Dominguez

Final Rating: 5.40. Finished 27 out of 64 entries.

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Animator: Dario Dominguez

Description: saddly i could no final this animation, but i still wanted to upload it as a personal challenge, im still proud with what i did but i now it still needs polishing

Experience: 4 years

Time taken: 6 hours

Comments:

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André:

Two beautiful characters who are sitting down. I loved how surprised they were by the exclamation of their interlocutor. The big line is offscreen. It's sad. It would have been nice to add more close-ups and camera movement.
Here the camera is only detached. It brings more longing to me, it makes me want to get away from these two boring and beautiful characters.

Tania Chernichenko:

Nice idea, I like it. The animations looks clear but I think you could put lights and play with its intensity to navigate viewer's eye.