Final Rating: 2.16. Finished 167 out of 173 entries.

357 views including the voting period.


Animator: Joshua Clay

Description: Decided on 2D to test out toonboom, Carrie really needs to settle!

Experience: 4 years

Time taken: 2 hours


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Reginald Crumpler:

Eye blinking needed.

Richard Carrillo:

Try animating next time.

Tobias Egeli:

not to bad lip aniam, but i realy think you should start by doing more 12 principle stuff. nail the basic and you are on a good path i think

Bryan Stone:

Lip-sync is good, but lack of character kills this one.

Deven Ramesh Bhosale:

better next time.


Ha ha what a stare

Ruud Harbers:

Why not add some eye blinks? The only things that move are their mouths. :-)

J.K. Riki:

You might consider ignoring all coloring and "final lines" and especially lip sync until you really get some animation going in rough form. Right now this is hardly even animation, it's just swapping mouths on a still image. Work much, much looser and get movement on screen before you do any clean up, and you'll end up with a much better end result. Good luck with future entries, keep at it!