Amol Wagh:

You've done the magic with the pencil. Great staging choice. Overall animation looks amazing.

C. J. Cow:

i'd really much rather we didn't have the ability to vote on our own entries. :/ i can either be dishonest to my heart, or do a disservice to my effort.

J.K. Riki:

Really nice job, keeping things loose works well here. One thing you want to keep in mind is making certain you know what's going on off-camera. Right now she doesn't feel solidly planted on the ground, and I'd wager it's because you only drew the waist up without considering where her feet were. By planting the feet you'll give a lot more solidity to the character, and you'll know exactly where the hips should go. Just a thought! Good luck with future entries! Always great to see more traditional 2D. :)

Enrico Westley:

Love this sketchy stuff! Just needs some more love!

Felicia F.:

I like the choice of Point-Of-View shot! The animation looks great too, possibly could be a bit more fluid though.

Jez:

I'm guessing it was not enough time the hand is just a rough sketch