Final Rating: 4.15. Finished 72 out of 173 entries.

314 views including the voting period.

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Animator: Derek Rich

Description: Glad to be part of the competition.

Experience: 1 year

Time taken: 2 weeks

Comments:

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Amol Wagh:

You have created quite a drama with those characters. Nice work!

You can work more on the facial expressions of the guy. Eyebrows especially, they are not moving as fluid as necessary.

Bryan Stone:

I like this. lip-sync is good, humor and actions flow well. I'm not a camera-ite so I can overlook the errors there. A fun view.

Amartya Mukherji:

The blue character is better but the other guy is not proper at all. It Needs a lot of improvement The arcs are not proper. flow is missing. Timing also is off. Needs a lot of improvement. but nice try. :)

Enrico Westley:

I like the fish, although I don't understand the "story" you're trying to tell. It could use some finessing.

Jassmany Diaz-Butron:

i like the fish !

Benjamin Berg:

The fish animation is decent but the human character feels bland and is very stiff.