Lee:

I really like how this piece is looking! its a bit floaty and the lip sync should be worked on, but i like how it is and i think your acting choices are nice. One thing to consider next time is your composition- right now your character is dead center in the middle, try the rule of thirds

Enrico Westley:

I think you need stronger poses (beats), and more poses (anticipation, moving holds, etc). You're also lacking a lot of the fundamentals, and I believe you need to focus on the basics (12 Principles).

Juan Carlos A C:

It was almost done!! Just needs the clean up. A little bit of timing, curves and the "Tell him!!" is soft, it needs to be stronger.

Matt Horstman:

Love the lip sync but the body lacks in character. Need more motion to tell us what she's feeling.