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You can have a better staging.
The focus should've been on the emotions of the character. Long shot shadows the overall performance of the each character. And you need to work on those walks. And why he snapped to the door in the end? Why the rush?
Needs a lot of improvement
Josh O Caoimh:
Like the jumping reaction, nice work! Just watch the mans movement at 244
There were a couple of floaty spots and a couple of spots where it popped. I believe if you add a couple story-telling poses, and smooth it out a bit --it'll be a nice piece.
Walk cycles could really use some work, but good effort overall!
Animator: Yeyo Wasel Cocamunga
Description: Marriage scene
Experience: 3 Years
Time taken: 1 Week