Richard Carrillo:

You can have a better staging.

Amol Wagh:

The focus should've been on the emotions of the character. Long shot shadows the overall performance of the each character. And you need to work on those walks. And why he snapped to the door in the end? Why the rush?

Amartya Mukherji:

Needs a lot of improvement

Josh O Caoimh:

Like the jumping reaction, nice work! Just watch the mans movement at 244

Enrico Westley:

There were a couple of floaty spots and a couple of spots where it popped. I believe if you add a couple story-telling poses, and smooth it out a bit --it'll be a nice piece.

Sarah Johnson:

Walk cycles could really use some work, but good effort overall!