Andy Cheung:

Some nice acting choices, but too many poses in the first part. The reactions toward the end are working well but i feel the overall physicality and body mechanics can do with some loosening up.

Enrico Westley:

I like what's happening! Needs some staging improvements! They're in the middle of nowhere.

Amartya Mukherji:

Good use of Mery rig. I am looking forward for some stunning animations with this exceptional rig. But i feel
You could have polished your animation further to match the emotion

Brooke Wagstaff:

She has quite a lot of jerkiness in her cog, especially in the 90-105 range. Sometimes it helps me if I just select the faces on the torso and head, then isolate-->view selected to see how smooth the base body movements are.