Final Rating: 3.19. Finished 134 out of 173 entries.

322 views including the voting period.


Animator: Charles Xu

Description: I like this audio which remind me of some sweet memory

Experience: half of year

Time taken: 2 weeks


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Andy Cheung:

Some good acting ideas. Couple of un-necessary cuts though, specifically the wide shot when she says 'tell him!' and the close up of his mouth saying 'you're not your self'.
Animation in general feels a little too linear and stiff.


great angle and the idea of the animation gets across really well. The problem is that it's just a plan so far. I really hope you'll keep working on this because it has the potential to be one of the best ones I've seen on here. :)

Enrico Westley:

That camera really got in close there! Haha. Personally, I try not to move the camera so much, for it gets really busy really fast!


well I must say this 1sec EXTREME close-up looks a bit weird.