Comments:
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Enrico Westley:
I think you need stronger poses (beats), and more poses (anticipation, moving holds, etc).
Richard Carrillo:
You need to think about contrast in timing, arcs, ease in and ease out. Try to act out yourself and then using it as reference, keep working :)
Animator: Jolie Thomas
Description: Learning animation at the DAVE School (Digital Arts and Visual Effects).
Experience: 3 Months
Time taken: 2 Weeks