Michael Launder:

the swimming is decent however your lip synch is lacking pretty heavily. you can really benefit from watching yourself talk with a small mirror. Also with lip synchs work on your ups and downs first. if you nail ups and downs and then the wides and narrows of the lips your lip synch will skyrocket in quality. after those two things you'll be really close! put your hand underneath your chin and say the words in the shot. you'll be able to count how often your chin hits your hand and that can give you your timing and number of openings that the mouth will do!

Rannva Macdonald Arnskov:

Lacks key poses, doesn't feel any weight or anatomy in the fish, like it's a toy that is just trown into different poses. Would do good with drawing some specific poses when researching gold fish.

Dominic Rayner:

Overacting, lipsynch off, where is the fish anyway?

Bryan Stone:

Work on sync