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An all to familar Story

by Don Dixon

Final Rating: 6.24. Finished 23 out of 177 entries.

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Animator: Don Dixon

Description: Young girl dealing with the loss of her brother, a loss that occurred because of ignorance and fear.

Experience: 12 or so years

Time taken: 16 days

Comments:

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Naman Aafle:

When she is saying "cloud" lip-sync seems off around frame 318

Michael Launder:

great work! i think the whites of her eyes are a bit distracting but the animation itself is top notch!

Shash047:

Nice

Iqtidar Ali Siddiqui:

good job

nabil:

nice.. i liked the idea

Sarah Johnson:

This camera move is actually really nice. Don't be afraid to vary up your mouth shapes with each word (this is actually a general note to all the entries)

Bryan Stone:

Nice! Sad but nice work.

Joey Aboma:

Very nice follow thru and love how the camera brings us closer to her.

Jimmy:

This makes me sad :(

Poornachander Adepu:

nice act

Sabrina Winkel:

This is the best one I've seen. I like everything even when the camera zooms in on her