Comments:
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Michael Launder:
great principles here! just lots of practice is next! for the most part the characters eyes stick with her head, have them move around independently as well it will give a lot of life to her
Dominic Rayner:
I think i get the sentiment but you didnt leave enough time for the polished animation, and gave yourself extra work by putting down the cake and picking it up again, which is a bit mysterious.
Bryan Stone:
Needs Polish
Animator: Josh Devenyi
Description: It's tough to be alone on your special day.
Experience: 3 Months
Time taken: 1.5 Weeks