Michael Launder:

think about timing and posing for your key frames, they seem random and floaty, arbitrarily moving from one to the next. I cant emphasize enough how important it is to plan ahead

Poornachander Adepu:

concept was good but main poses and act is not good! needed to learn lot of things!

David Alin:

nice effort on the staging

Bryan Stone:

Creative set-up, need more polish on the models, camera moves need tweeking.