Rannva Macdonald Arnskov:

The rock starts to float midair for the character to grab it, instead of her moving in time to catch it. The rock is also moving very odd as she trows it.

Once the door opens, she doesn't have any transition from that she is sad until she realises that she's free. She's just straight on at once happy.

I would have liked to see more of her face.

Michael Launder:

you have a good start here, however your key poses are lacking holds. As you move from one pose to the next then you concentrate on overlapping and spacing. Your key poses are good here but the in betweens are lacking. I'd recommend spending about a month doing very simple things, like sitting on a chair or standing up. really have your key poses and hit the in betweens, then start making it more complex. after you brush up on your skills then come back to the competition and show everyone how much you've grown!

Dominic Rayner:

Animation not really in keeping with the dialogue, and not very well times I am afraid.

Bryan Stone:

Okay. Maybe more polish on the movements.

Michael Kristiansen:

I would try to improve the gravity on the stone, and her arm movements. It is clunky/floaty compared to the rest of the animation. Perhaps try and act it out yourself or even fim you while acting it so you have a really good reference.