Michael Launder:

find your key poses, these are getting a little swimmy and arent reading very well, really look how to move from one to the next. the camera motion is awesome and if you nail the key poses it will compliment the animation quite well!

Bryan Stone:

Needs something more but I'm not sure what it could be. Feels underdeveloped.

Dominic Rayner:

Try to simplify some of the hand and shoulder movements, there is a fair bit of random looking movement. The second character could perhaps have a more empathetic expression.

Eddie Mendez:

to much arm, hand and finger movement lol it you could fix that it would be a better animation i think