Michael Launder:

great work! the eye movements feel really fast and jerky like they hit a wall in stead of easing out. i like the anticipation at the end of the shot

J.K. Riki:

Cool little ending! It would be nice if it was even more pronounced at the end there. That final pose could be stronger. Otherwise, nice twist on the story! Good luck next month with your next entry!

Bryan Stone:

Animation is great, did not understand the story line which left me confused what emotion focus was.

Michael Kristiansen:

Looks good. The lipsync is a little off in the beginning, or maybe it's just me. But well done.

Antar Irvin:

Uhh...whats about to happen here. You gotta tell me!

Dominic Rayner:

Vampire? Not entirely clear what is going on. Animation a bit rigid and lip synch is inaccurate.