Final Rating: 5.65. Finished 35 out of 177 entries.

902 views including the voting period.


Animator: Peyman Bodaghi

Description: Please eCritique My Animate. Thank You.!!!

Experience: 6 Years

Time taken: 3 Week part Time


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Nassim Briedj:

XXX ;)

Seo Ryong Jaw:

nice various movement and emotions. but mouth shapes and performance doesn't sound quite match with animation..
and it seems too much use of shoulder makes feeling little bit odd
! antway good!

Michael Launder:

a lot of strong animation here! next thing i would work on is cameras, staging is a really important aspect to animation, i think you cut a few too many times and the back and forth between close and far is a little disorienting.

Sarah Johnson:

I appreciate the unique take on the audio here!

Bryan Stone:

Too many camera cuts reduces the effectiveness of this piece.

Harihara Shrinivas:

Overall everything is nice the situation is good great attempt

David Alin:

animation is not bad the camera is too frantic

Poornachander Adepu:

good feel

Dominic Rayner:

XXX? What kind of talent does she have to show? Assuming nothing of the kind, the way she sings and her body movements seem expressive, but might fit a different kind of song rather than this. This dialogue is hard to find excellent action for it, so well done for making the effort.