Dina Mohy:

lip-sync needs some adjustments, reduce eye movement a little

Michael Launder:

everything is great, im not loving the throw! maybe it need some different spacing or timing applied

Dominic Rayner:

Not sold with the acting. Some expressions seem out of place, for example the screwing up followed by the extreme raising of the eye brows, and the clutching of the stone to his chest just doesn't seem right. Apart from that the overall movement and lips is not perfect, but reasonably well done. The stone thrown looks like it pops from a contraint; the arm movement doesn't match the direction it is thrown.

Bryan Stone:

Like this.

Poornachander Adepu:

nice act! little more improvement