Michael Launder:

great work with the lip synch, really look at people when the talk (yes you'll look creepy but you can always say "i'm getting reference for animation)" people talk lazily our mouths barely move when we talk. look for that subtlety. in my opinion getting body acting is always more imporant that dialogue. Animators at disney usually do lip synch after the body motion is almost perfect. Body language is even more expressive than dialogue

Michael Kristiansen:

Not a fan of the camera angles. I think the mouth moves way to much. Try and sing it yourself in the mirror for reference.

Bryan Stone:

Camera shots kill the overall animation. Character lip-sync works but needs improvement, overall character is stiff and dull.