Jim P:

wow, if you had time to finish.. you must be a professional. great work

Robert Firestone:

Love the animation at the beginning!

Nick Kondo:

Nice work, I think the shot of the old woman was a bit static, but I like the idea of her going under the covers at the end!

Poornachander Adepu:

which is starting part is superb! but suddenly which you are used character is unnecessary! if you continued with same character it will be awesome! but i like it the starting portion of animation! keep it up!

Syuzan Melikyan:

The beggining is nice

Paulo H. Scatena:

I'd love to see it if you had the chance to polish it all as it begins. Lovely animation!

Bryan Stone:

First shot is spot on, the old maid shot might have been delivered better is some kind of overlay/flashback while the child is still singing. The end would have been better if we saw the child singing as she pulled the cover over her head.

Dominic Rayner:

The opening shot is the best part, it's a shame you didn't have time to make the rest to complete it ias an animation. The old woman is a time filler and although the animation of getting into bed is nice, it could do with showing the character's face and lips more. Well done however.