Robert Firestone:

Too far from the character.

Michael Launder:

you have some nice posing but the video is squished and hard to see, concentrate on presentation next month!

Eddie Mendez:

i dont get it, is the girl the one singing the song? her body movement doesnt seem to go with the audio.

David Alin:

doesn't look bad animated but be careful with your presentation, I can't put more than 5 stars because it's so hard to read

J.K. Riki:

You've got some great poses, but I have no idea what's going on story or character-wise. She just seems to be moving, without a lot of motivation. The movement that's there is very pretty, though, nice job on the easing in and out and such.

Michael Kristiansen:

Wrong format. Shame, cause it looks okay to me otherwise.

Bryan Stone:

Good, but is out of sync with sound.

Andrés Rosel:

I believe perhaps the movements are a bit too exaggerated. She moves too much.

Antar Irvin:

Lip syncing is a little off. You put a lot of work into the movements of the character, so I want to acknowledge that, but I dont think it matches the dialogue.

Kirby Drisdale:

The animation is smooth, but I believe the characters movements are too fast for the way the dialogue feels. It doesn't seem to match the mood or with syncing.