Comments:
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Dina Mohy:
you can slow her moves a little, start squeezing the flower at frame 232 when she says not in a castle and there is no need for the hair adjustment move. the last expression is more of an angry than miserable .
Michael Launder:
really look at walks, the walk here is pretty janky and has lots of trouble rotating the hips and shoulders. it feels pretty stiff
Dominic Rayner:
Too much action with unrefined animation. What was she angry about, and why take it out on a flower?
Bryan Stone:
Love the emotion and expression changes.
Steve Hawthorne:
why go so angry at the end...?
Yes, I can see you need to improve the mechanics, but the staging worked nicely.
Animator: Dustin Jones
Description: Mery walks up a set of stairs and plucks a flower from a flower pot. she then crushes it and throws it over a balcony.
Experience: Not a lot, but hope to be good one day.
Time taken: Two very long painful weeks