Naman Aafle:

At start, place the camera closer to the girl so that movement will be slow. fast camera movements tends the expectation of viewer to get an action scene.

Michael Launder:

good performance! loving the way she interacts with the environment. her eye movements give lots of life to the characters. What i would work on next are lip synch and some movements seem bouncy rather than following through like the head bounce at frames 245

Servan Castillo:

love the lipsynch!, but would love a bit more emotion in her body language too.

Bryan Stone:

Like it.

Michael Kristiansen:

Well done. I like the lipsync, one of the better ones I've seen so far + you have breathing included which is very nice. Shame about the UI/interface in the render though. Only thing I would make different is the beginning - which is a little to weak compared to the voice that has more power imo. But nice animation.