Final Rating: 3.66. Finished 126 out of 177 entries.

471 views including the voting period.


Animator: Nesir Muradov

Description: A girl is fan of any kind of art and she is trying to draw the castle of her dream. However, math won't let her free.

Experience: Few months

Time taken: 3 weeks at nights


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Michael Launder:

this has a lot of potential! next step is polishing things out with nice moving curves. her eyes always move with her head as well, see if loosening up their movement could add life to your characters

Mohamad Rezaei:

Lacks fundamentals

Bryan Stone:


Michael Kristiansen:

To me the thing that needs most attention (for improvement) is the lipsync. Have a look at this one:
Great advice and handy reference when doing dialogue.

Dominic Rayner:

I don't really get what is happening and the lipsynch seems limited to open and shut mouth with minimal expression.

Eddie Mendez:

body movement is okay, lip sync way off. you want to try shaping her mouth more, right now it just looks like her jaw goes up and down.