Michael Launder:

you have some good stuff here! it feels really bouncy when she reaches for the bird again!

Harihara Shrinivas:

Our all the the concept is good !and presented it in a cute way but in animation the retham has to be there ..nice imagination..

J.K. Riki:

Really cool character design! I also like the final shot, it establishes the mood very well. I'd suggest not placing the camera so straight-on, though. It lessens the appeal of the character and animation. Good luck with your future entries! :)

Bryan Stone:

too static and stiff.

Seo Ryong Jaw:

needs to have timing fundamentals

Dominic Rayner:

It would be better for you to focus just on the main character because the sacrifice you have made is not to work enough at the animation of the singer. Seems you are adding too many other unfinished elements.