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Michael Launder:
you have a great example here of key poses floating around, After you find a key frame and pose Stick it and hold it for a little bit. the animation will feel a bit more natural and appealing! the contrast of the moon is kind of distracting, if you're going to render, really give yourself some time for that! or ask someone you know thats good at lighting and rendering to do it!
Robert Firestone:
I like the idea, animation is a bit floaty and I think you could get closer to her sooner.
Bryan Stone:
Well done.
Razam Ali:
Hmmm simple but some thing is missing ,
Antar Irvin:
Good visual, but you need to do more with the character's hand movements. The fingers need to clasp around her arms/wrist more. Especially since the rest of the body doesn't need to move.
Animator: Yigit Ali Mercan
Description: Young girl is escaping the war
Experience: 9 months
Time taken: 1 weeks