Jean Lamy:

Very floaty animation. the shot choice isn't well done because it's hard to connect who is speaking.

Karl Pontau:

Couldn't tell who was talking at the beginning

Gerben Brandsma:

Story idea is nice, but with shots like these you really need to exaggerate the movements a lot more to even know who's talking.

Tari Mack:

I like that the setting actually fits the audio - ambient music at a house party - so nice attention to detail there, that helps make this clip convincing. In the first shot, it was unclear which of the two characters on the couch was talking though. The character animation should be more fluid; frames 57 - 70 the blue-hair character stops moving his head too abruptly. If he's flinching because he started moving his tipsy head too fast, he should put his hand on his forehead to clarify the action. The dark kid's animation seems stiff and limited. I like how the blue haired character, at 207-288, is looking up and that leads naturally to him staring at the girl walking.