Tari Mack:

Convincing! Each action has its own time to breathe before the next thing starts, so nice pacing of movement. I like how the setting enhances the animation. Animation wise, this is great. The only complaint is subjective: frames 75- 115, the standing character looks away from who he's talking to, and that seems a little odd. If he's looking away because he's feeling guilty about the pink slip he's about to hand his friend, it seems more like he should be looking down after he looks away. That's completely just my opinion though.

Karl Pontau:

Finger point seems out of place. Sitting character bobs between two poses, looks odd.

Zack Y.:

Super smooth. I love the emotion of it all, you can really see it. Great job.

Daniel:

Just a little point, the human neck can't turn that far around. Seriously, my friend and I tried it, and it's just not possible. He needs to turn his shoulders a bit at frame 200. It just really bugged me.