Tari Mack:

Nice, full animation. The style is interesting and specific. Both characters stay on model and there are holds where holds make sense to be. On frames 199 - 216 more shoulder slumping to show the sigh, and maybe some more detailed mouth shapes in frames 246 - 252. That's it though. Respect.

Jordan Lewers:

The camera movement was far too subtle for the man on the left to suddenly be behind the afro guy. So now it looks like the guy in the cap got out his seat to get behind the other guy. It would've been better if you simply panned to the left after frame 252, or even kept the original camera angle since it worked just as fine.

Jasmine Keith:

Simple but effective and it's nice to see that your characters don't pop around at all. I think the most important thing for you to work on would be anatomy with solid volume and foreshortening.