Nick Kondo:

Staging and context could use a little work. Wasn't sure what the character was holding or why. Keep it up!

Clara Myers:

I liked the set-up but the characters feel a bit rigid.

Mitch Buzgan:

The animation is nice! The bugging thing is your cameras, you move them to much and you cut and zoom it when there is no reason for it. Because of that you lose your animation which is well done. Good luck!

Cezar De Almeida Johansson:

Why did we see the knife getting thrown? Feels like a bad camera move and worst there was no pay off.

Jasmine Keith:

Jumpy and overall needs more polish.

Tim:

The camera movements are distracting from the actual animation. The lip sync needs clearer mouth shapes