Final Rating: 3.38. Finished 94 out of 118 entries.

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Animator: Lance Lim

Description: Sometimes what you are looking for will appear when you didn't look for it

Experience: 2 years

Time taken: 2.5 weeks


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Jasmine Keith:

Work on the weight of the impact when the character drops down to the counter. Also you seem to have an out of place key or perhaps a bad spline on the hand on about frame 131. You've got some good movements but too many parts spend too much time frozen. Just need to keep working on it.


The movements don't seem to happen smoothly. Watching the mechanics of the body movement feels just like that. Watching a mechanism moves. Overlapping action and follow through would help this a lot. Also make sure that weight is taken into account which would help with your arcs. At the end especially the bartender makes some big movements and his torso stays still.