« Back to December Competition

Practice Makes Perfect

by Ben Davis

Final Rating: 6.32. Finished 15 out of 118 entries.

836 views including the voting period.

NEXT

Animator: Ben Davis

Description: A young man learns one last secret.

Experience: 3 years

Time taken: 2 weeks

Comments:

(Commenting only available during the rating period)

syrus johnson:

good ending

Jean Lamy:

I like it :)

Karl Pontau:

Characters seem very springy, movements don't fit with the tone of the audio. Love the ending.

Khalifa Abdullah Al-mana:

Good job! ... I liked the anticipation in the very first second before the start of the conversation.. small but made the scene looks like real acting

Tari Mack:

The facial expressions are really strong, but the t-shirt character's sitting back on frames 160-183 is too fast, and so is the leotard character getting up at 284-291. Frames 0-152 are the best, really smooth and natural.

Tim:

The character interaction feels very natural. The attention to the small movements while listening and such really make these characters come alive.