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Listen to your conscience

by Guy Rathbone

Final Rating: 4.58. Finished 55 out of 118 entries.

409 views including the voting period.


Animator: Guy Rathbone

Description: This conscience may not be trustworthy...

Really appreciate feedback, i am aware a lot could be done to improve on it, (such as the 2D character) however time would not allow.

Experience: About a year and a half, with 3-4 months with maya recently.

Time taken: I didn't keep track of the hours, back and forth over the month


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Christoph Lendenfeld:

nice blending of 2d and 3d but you to work on your timing and spacing so that it fits better with the audio. For example at frame 200 when he says "a lot", it is really short in the audio but your animation floats through this part.

Tari Mack:

I love that you mixed 2D and 3D, and I like the story. I think the little ghost moves around too much from 46-88. It should be mostly still while waiting for its chance to eat Moom! :) It should probably start the animation being where it is at frame 106, screen left of Moom. Moom's basic movement is good, but his arm looks broken around frame 213-220, so try bringing his elbow forward more. It looks like the audio is ahead of the animation throughout, though, so try moving the entire audio track a back in time to match it to the animation.