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Karl Pontau:
I recommend shooting reference of yourself acting out the scene you want to animate. Your poses and movements aren't believable. If you compared footage of yourself acting out this scene, for both characters, you will notice what aspects of your animation are in need improvement.
Animator: Alan Oyaneder
Description: Just remember to use a neck strap in these situations
Experience: 3rd year animation student
Time taken: 5 days