Final Rating: 4.01. Finished 45 out of 70 entries.

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Animator: melisasanimation

Description: A Lazy student talk about ....

Experience: 1

Time taken: 24 hours


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Brian Rusnak:

Nice work! I like how the first character sits on the desk next to the 2nd character...says a lot about his personality.

I feel like there are too many camera cuts. Maybe start with the 2nd camera angle, have the character move in and sit on the desk in the same shot, then cut to the last angle when the other character says his line "SIDEKICK??".

Nice work!


Unclear poses here...could do with some still poses that read well...good effort.

Prashant Makwana:

Good poses
Needs a lot of improvement