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by Fabian Dietz
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I like this, although Character 2 was very jittery and unanimated.
Like the poses but it feels like he drifts from pose to pose its like they're all moving at the same speed and have the camera reach your second character before he goes on to say about ideas and theories Its looking good though!
Nice work, I like the first character's gestures as he's describing the space.
Apart from the 2nd character, I would hold some of the poses on the first character a bit longer. The gestures work but he is constantly moving throughout the piece and bending around. Holding him still for some of those parts would allow the gestures to become stronger on their own.
Pretty good acting choices...very floaty though, you need some snap in places.
well... you can do a lot better
it's getting there, need better performing.
I think the first character could have more variety in the qualities of motion. It is smooth alright, but I think it could use a little stress or pause
I think everything shouldn't be move, especially the camera :) Acting is the most important thing and just use each element to show the acting clear. Have a good work. It's just my opinion as a user of course. Have a nice work.
Nice idea. Reminds me of Happy days. But the animation feels extremely floaty. Look at films with snappier timing. See how many frames are between each pose and adopt a similar approach. It may really help your animation.
Nice animation with good potential. Simplifying the camera move would be great
Animator: Fabian Dietz
Experience: 11 months
Time taken: 2 weeks