Final Rating: 2.86. Finished 64 out of 70 entries.

393 views including the voting period.


Animator: y can aysun

Description: It's homework actually
sorry about sound glitches

Experience: still student

Time taken: six hours


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Brian Rusnak:

Nice work. I like the first character's movement on his first line "Woah", pushing back from the building.

I feel like the animation would be more clear without the panning camera work. Try to set up the shot where all of your subjects are in frame, and build upon your animation up from there.

James Harkonnen:

try coming up with a better blocking next time.

Vedanth Panchoo:

Audio is a bit messy. Love the concept though.

Prashant Makwana:

Lacks fundamentals