Comments:
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Brian Rusnak:
Nice character designs. The gesture between frames 150 and 180 is also really well-drawn.
I feel like there might be too many cuts in the entire work. Instead of cutting to a close-up at frame 85, keep the camera pulled back and have the bear lean in during the wide-shot. This way, you could show both the bear's action and the 2nd character's reaction to him leaning in without the extra jump-cut.
Nice work!
Dom Signorile:
This is one of the only frame by frame animations in this contest with a really good clean pass. Timing and spacing are correct too. Good job dude!
James Harkonnen:
nice camera work
Paraskevi Koutalou:
I like the sketching style! I just think the movements are a bit too fast and maybe need more flow. I think from frame 142 on the flow gets better
Gull:
Good effort...I felt you should have stayed on the main character more, you're making too many cuts that interfere with the flow of your animation.
Animator: Michael Arca Sedda
Description: An unbearable boss tries to get rich through honey production
Experience: 3 Years
Time taken: 2 Weeks (after work)