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Brian Rusnak:
Very interesting composition, I enjoy the comic-panel layout.
The characters seem to float through the majority of the piece. I would try to focus on specific poses, hitting important "key" moments of the dialogue for both body and facial animation ("Woah, "Crime lab", "thorough" etc). Then, focus on the inbetween-poses.
I'd really like to see you continue to work with this type of layout. Keep going!
Vedanth Panchoo:
Still needs more time in the oven...
Prashant Makwana:
Needs a lot of improvement
Animator: Vedanth Panchoo
Description: If there is anything that makes a team work, it is cooperation and being aware of is happening. While this dynamic duo is doing the complete opposite.
Experience: About 2 and a half years
Time taken: Within a 2 week period