Christi Clausen:

The first part is a little confusing as to what exactly is happening but I like the idea overall. Perhaps adding some more detail so that the audience can tell where this is taking place?

ro crown:

Love the ruffness, but the first shot of him looking down seems as if he is looking up and that confuses the audience...anyways good luck with future competitions!!!

Alice:

The angles and camera moves are original and interesting but make it hard to understand what’s going on. I would say it’s better to choose a more traditional setting and focus on the quality and fluidity of the animation before moving on to use more complicated angles.

Elisabeth Janerka:

That first shot is quite hard to read.

Katie Steuernagel:

The climbing movement is well done, but the staging and facial expressions are pretty confusing due to how messy the animation is. I would suggest taking more time to clean up the lines. Keep it up!

Juan:

you're headed in the right direction.
add more In-betweens, slow in and outs. Work on the Animation fundamentals.
keep studying and just keep working on it

Zac Eriah:

Their actions whilst talking is really natrual and realistic! Just wow!