Comments:
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Juliette:
i love the animation, and the life in the eyes of the characters. The lypsing and the dialogue are just shifted
Richard Adams:
Perhaps the single most beautiful entry this month. Very well animated, too. Top 5 entry in my opinion. :)
Aaron James Mongcopa:
winner!!! acting, concept and rendering. The mths is ahead of the sound though, need to adjust that a bit.
Don:
nice!
Romantra:
I really like this one. The staging and movements fit the characters and audio well. The lip sync is a bit off though.
Leonardo Pereira:
Great shape and style. But the lip sync need another pass because is complete off. But great animation!!!
Jerry Lau:
Nice style, nice work!!!
Alice:
The animation is great but the audio seems to be a bit late :(
Anna Eivör:
Beautiful style makes you feel like in a fairytale
Elisabeth Janerka:
Nice animation!
But there's something off with the staging of the shot with the guy talking. I think it's because both characters are placed in the screen right side of the composition. I would definitely move him more screen left and maybe have the girl be partly visible in the framing too.
Katie Steuernagel:
This has such great appeal and I really enjoy the arm movements. The lip sync is good for the most part but could use some improvement, especially by exaggerating the facial expressions more. Overall good work!
Juan:
frame 60 to 65 lip sync is off
Zac Eriah:
Wow, the scenery and everything is so well done!
Animator: Sharu.
Description: A small girl having conversation with an elf on a subway.
Experience: 5
Time taken: hr a day