Comments:
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Ben Zingo:
make sure you add some anticipation, overshoot, etc.
A lot of the head movements feel stiff and jerky
Leonardo Rivera:
Story didn’t make sense cause there was no picture of the photographer. Felt like a lot of unnecessary twinning with the arms throughout as well which took me out of it. I like your idea though, and the boy is well done
Animator: Andy
Description: Olive gets scared by the flash in the middle of the moment of her photo graduation session.
Experience: Student
Time taken: 2 weeks