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Thomas Darmon-Sanger:
Try making this on one file next time.
Ben Zingo:
Lot of room for improvement here, I think one of the big things is camera cuts/framing. There's too many cuts, and jumping between camera angles is confusing.
On the animation side, make sure you're using easing/splines, and think about offsetting the timing between some of your limbs/actions. Adding some slight drag as you move down the limb will add a sense of flexibility, so the characters feel less rigid/stiff
Animator: Andra-Mihaela Popa
Description: Jim and Jemma take a picture together at a carnival, but Jemma looks bad in it so she complains.
Experience: 1 year and 3 months
Time taken: 3 weeks but didn't work on it every day