Comments:
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Ben Zingo:
the audio includes several extra breaths/sighs? Make sure you're not editing the audio, as per the rules of the competition.
A closer camera angle, and clearer lighting (and maybe more matte/less glossy skin texture) would help us see the character's acting more clearly
Leonardo Rivera:
Great concept and posing I think the timing could be improved upon a bit. For example her arm from 66-106 feels too slow. Her eyes disappear on 268 which is kinda creepy and she doesn’t blink on that head turn which adds to the creepiness. I would zoom in a bit so we can see their expressions more too. Good work.
Animator: Marc Montebon
Description: Two friends looking at a billboard of them.
Experience: in my 2nd year at Escape studios learning animation
Time taken: 2 weeks