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Animator: JasonLauWeiSheng

Description: A couple argues a picture

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Time taken: 6day

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Mahesh Waran:

The camera here breaks the rule of switching the sides which distracts the whole scene , otherwise decent try!

Ben Zingo:

be careful of the 180 rule and how fast you cut! Also cutting between actions, to a totally still shot of the camera is jarring

overall the body mechanics/actions look good, but you should really do some research into storyboarding and editing