Comments:
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Lucia Caccavale:
Animation is really nice, maybe frame the shot differently so we can see more?
Ben Zingo:
the actions looks really nice from what I can see....but it's hard to see! I don't know why you put the camera so far away, when the background isn't relevant to the character acting
Leonardo Rivera:
The audience should be able to tell whats happening in the scene even without the audio and I think thats the main issue with this shot. The staging doesnt help and theres no second character
Isaiah "Genus" Griggs:
I would have it as a medium shot
Animator: IlhanLutfiZaharani
Description: I hope I can win so I can gain deeper knowledge about animation from feedback or reviews. btw idid it in 2 days bcause deadline as freelance and from this i hope i can jointhe animation industry thxxxx
Experience: student
Time taken: 2 day