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Richard Clark:
Good effort! Interesting concept and setup! Some of the camera work on this is good!!
I feel the movement of the character in the first shot hits a wall at times.
Lip sync is off and needs improvement. At times it's a bit ambiguous.
Going back to the camera work. I like the 2nd and 3rd shots. I feel like the 1st and last shots are too flat to camera. It's probably because the buildings behind are mainly straight and flat while you have an angle on the buildings in the robot shot. The last shot, I feel you can do a more extreme closeup on the face then pull back to show the gun coming out. Sorta similar to the robot shot where you reveal the arms and legs and the other 2 robots. This would mirror the 2 opposing sides better.
Animator: Maciej Marucha
Description: As the machines prepare for a final attack, a mysterious stranger delve into the heart of unknown and uncover a terrible secret involving the annihilation of mankind!
Experience: 2 years
Time taken: 2 weeks