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Did you just call me dumb?

by Szegedi Dorottya

Final Rating: 3.95. Finished 47 out of 75 entries.

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Animator: Szegedi Dorottya

Description: two children practising for a play

Experience: Im in uni still studying

Time taken: 4 days

Comments:

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Richard Clark:

Haha! Funny setup!

However, it lacks the fundamentals. Just simply moving the mouth and eyes, for the most part, doesn't gain interest. Even though your posing is good, I would venture into body mechanics like you started at the end with the male character.

I would also suggest learning the simple "bouncing ball" exercise to start understanding the basics of animation.

Paul Lange:

I like the character designs.

Jessica Matson:

The character designs are awesome! Something to help beef up your animation would be some more tweening and movement of the bodies. The characters feel very stagnant at the moment.